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This was a heavy collaboration with $endosage, and he should duplicate this submission in his gallery since he and I had pretty much equal parts in the creation of this concept.
Anyway, as you've probably noticed myself and my team have built a number of "departmental logos" for the varied departments of dA staff. Until now we were unable to come up with a usable idea. We threw around all sorts of ideas: brains, paint splatters, representational lines, etc. Eventually we sort of circled back into the idea of a factory, which ends up being a great representation of what the Creative Team does for dA. The team, on the whole, is very much geared towards continuous output. We're all about high quality production of brilliant design, and the level of speed and skill with which we create our work rivals every other group within the company. Just yesterday we had a free hour so $endosage and I talked about the idea again, and after throwing together some more sketches I made mention of the idea of paint covering a globe. $endosage said, "What, like the Sherwin Williams logo?" The comparison was fair, and the topic gave him an idea. He executed on it and then I cleaned it up and finalized the lockup today. After all that talking I still haven't described the icon. Sheesh. The Basic Illustration Factory + Dripping paint. That's the idea. Factory = symbol of how we work. Paint = symbol of creativity and our tools. The C is within the mark so we can use it on its own in an avatar format. Why is it a reddish-pink tone? We had to stand out from the rest of the departmental logos! Interesting to note: We started working on this project 5 months ago. Comments
Now I say this knowing absolutely nothing about design, but the only bad thing is I don't really get a sense of dripping paint. I only see two drops, and you sort of have to look to see them. They don't stand out very well.
I'm not sure if that helps or makes sense, but that was my first impression. I do like the color and the font though Nice touch with the dripping paint and it makes sense in symbolism.
-- Author and artist of the graphic novel The Dirty Dingo. Save wolves:[link] Hidden by Owner Firstly, nice work.
For mine, I just think that the type doesn't go totally with the icon. The 'C' within the icon looks great and I think that would make a great looking typeface next to logo. Maybe the C in Creative has a fair bit to do with this. Have you tried making the C with rounded corners on the left but then straight with rounded corners on the tips of the C? I'd be interested to see what that looks like because I feel it would reflect the rounded edges of the icon more. I like the joining of the t and i, but the kerning in general feels a little tight. -- CKGD.net Oooh, I like it! Especially the color. I can't even SPELL the word "fuchsia" without looking it up, which makes it an extra Creative word.
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Critiques
Besides that, i love the Logotype the kerning is just perfect it looks so solid and strong, full of details, very catching for the eye, the composition and the proportions are perfect. i think you could work from the logo forward.
thanks for reading.
First of all, I didn't notice the paint drips until I read the description and looked back at the logo. It might be easier to see the paint drips if you bevel the logo around the drips to make the logo flat and the drips 3Dish.
Secondly, I really can't see much purpose for the "C" appearing in the logo. The word Creative and the C are written in two different fonts, making either one or the other seem out of place. If you're planning to use just the logo alone, then consider changing the "C" to the same font as the "Creative" is written in.
All in all, this is another beautiful logo. I'm sure the Creative team will love it!
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